I think your introduction could be more focused and discuss specific things you identified from your research as at the minute it is a bit vague and waffly. Look at the glossary of magazine terms from my blog and link them to BOTH your research and your final magazine.
This needs more detail about your DPS.
ReplyDeleteI think your introduction could be more focused and discuss specific things you identified from your research as at the minute it is a bit vague and waffly. Look at the glossary of magazine terms from my blog and link them to BOTH your research and your final magazine.