Michelle you've clearly shown what your magazine is going to be about and who you are aiming it at. You have gone into incredible depth and detail about your audience and this is great! I would pay £3.50 for your magazine. To improve, just make sure you remember your audience when creating your magazine. Well Done!
I like how you have clearly stated what your magazine is going to look like. The use of detail and images on your pitch allows your target audience to decide weather or not this type of magazine would appeal to them. I would pay £3.00 for your magazine. To improve, elaborate more on artists which will be included in your magazine.
I love the footprints in the video to navigate the user through each part its very unique, and so much more interesting that other animations. i think its great how you've used examples of magazines, i would pay around £4.00 for your magazine as it appeals to me because its the genre of music i listen to. To improve maybe you could some examples of artists that inspire you.
Michelle you've clearly shown what your magazine is going to be about and who you are aiming it at. You have gone into incredible depth and detail about your audience and this is great! I would pay £3.50 for your magazine.
ReplyDeleteTo improve, just make sure you remember your audience when creating your magazine.
Well Done!
I like how you have clearly stated what your magazine is going to look like. The use of detail and images on your pitch allows your target audience to decide weather or not this type of magazine would appeal to them.
ReplyDeleteI would pay £3.00 for your magazine.
To improve, elaborate more on artists which will be included in your magazine.
I love the footprints in the video to navigate the user through each part its very unique, and so much more interesting that other animations. i think its great how you've used examples of magazines, i would pay around £4.00 for your magazine as it appeals to me because its the genre of music i listen to. To improve maybe you could some examples of artists that inspire you.
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